Ah, nicely written.....but I myself like to live life on the edge, gamble with free verse as well as rhyme and rhthym. I guess it all depends on ones likes. I myself think for my more sensual stuff, free verse adds to it and allows it to move freer and truer. But each to their own, eh?
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