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Jim Raynor
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0 posted 1999-09-19 04:06 AM


What is love something you can just pick up and throw away...

Is love something you can just end with out sheding a tear...

Is love fear that you might never commit...

or is love something that happens between two people when they really care about each other and want to protect each other no matter what the cost...

is love something like that...

or is love just something you say to make some one else feel special...

no love is something that takes time to earn it takes trust, courage, soul, strenth, and of course 2 people who never want to see the other one hurt thats love....

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-19 12:29 PM


Very true!

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-09-19 12:43 PM


I would have to agree

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Jim Raynor
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3 posted 1999-09-19 06:00 PM


im glad you agree with me about it

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Severn
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4 posted 1999-09-19 06:47 PM


I agree, but in truth I think it's more. It's a force of it's own.
Jim Raynor
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5 posted 1999-09-19 07:08 PM


yea that woulda been a great add on i gotta think these through more before posting well poetry isnt that hard im use to it seeing as how i ussally write love poems to my girl Diona

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RainbowGirl
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6 posted 1999-09-19 07:15 PM


well the humorous side of me would say: love is counting to 5 before hitting the send button..*g*..ooops

HUSG


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Jim Raynor
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7 posted 1999-09-19 07:19 PM


Rain bow girl that is funny hahaha
i will give you that much
-jim

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WhtDove
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8 posted 1999-09-19 08:35 PM


Hmmn. Ok, I agree!
Jim Raynor
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9 posted 1999-09-20 05:38 PM


cool im glad you agree
-jim

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Jim Raynor
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10 posted 1999-09-20 05:56 PM


this is funny, this is the first poem i ever wrote and its already got 10 replys most of them are mine though lol i guess saying thanks and answearing questions isn't so bad

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Beki
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11 posted 1999-09-20 10:38 PM


JIm, I think I read somewhere here that you are only 13....if that is true then you are already showing great wisdom. :-) Love is everything you say, and so much more..but you have a great start in understanding here! I think you girl is very lucky! :-)
Jim Raynor
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12 posted 1999-09-22 05:41 PM


Thanks Beki


-Jim Raynor

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Jim Raynor
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13 posted 1999-09-22 08:48 PM


hey has any one noticed that every one in the back pages like pages 9-10-11-12 got some great poems

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