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The Jackal
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since 08-13-99
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0 posted 09-19-99 01:30 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

I beat back the scream
its a part of me
it eats away at me
scabs and bones
do come to mind
as you kiss the world behind
fools do spread
an ocean wide
its just a running start
a place to hide
then your done
dead from multiple lies



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Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


1 posted 09-19-99 01:36 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

How sade, we are all a bunch of depressed souls tonight aren't we?
Nice job though...:

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-19-99 01:54 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Jackal.....very deep as usual. You prompt your readers to stop just for a minute and think....to play between the words, search for hidden meaning....I like that, challange is a good thing!

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