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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 1999-09-19 01:01 AM


DreamEvil's poem about the 'romances' failed to include this one:




He sits in front of the ‘puter screen
writing words full of deep expression
but somewhere out there waits the one
who hides a secret obsession

She lingers on the fringe of the ‘net
for on her, he has made an impression
if he only knew, he run and hide
before she makes him a possession

But unlike the ‘puter, she’ll not turn off
she’s wicked in her aggression
poor Balladeer, innocently has
become the object of lustful expression.


(don't worry, it's not real, just a poem to go with the cute graphic I found!)

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-09-19 01:05 AM


LOLOL

When the laughter and awe stop, I'll post a proper reply.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-09-19 01:34 AM


laughing here

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

caroline
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3 posted 1999-09-19 01:35 AM


~*ROTFLMAO*~
Christopher
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4 posted 1999-09-19 01:38 AM


(shaking head)
too cute again

Loneheart
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5 posted 1999-09-19 02:20 AM


It’s nice to see so many great poets in one place
I guess its all so nice to know you all can
Laugh and enjoy each others humor
And still write with such passion
And complement each other with such wonderful words of
Encouragement
truly I am thankful I have found this forum

Poet deVine
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6 posted 1999-09-19 08:30 AM


A wondrous place indeed. Thank you all. I am sending this to the top as Balladeer has yet to see it!

Pepper
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7 posted 1999-09-19 09:17 AM


I ditto Caroline.....love the graphics.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

moonmoon
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8 posted 1999-09-19 09:24 AM



Ditto ..ditto..ditto...Still smilin'..

Nan
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9 posted 1999-09-19 10:48 AM


A very becoming likeness indeed....
juanita
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10 posted 1999-09-19 11:29 AM


I enjoyed this one is very funny!
Denise
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11 posted 1999-09-19 12:18 PM


Too cute!

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Denise

Iloveit
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12 posted 1999-09-20 02:15 PM


yep, too cute, smiling here....and for the first time today too, thanks!
U K Hero
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13 posted 1999-09-20 03:29 PM


Bulls'eye... I not sure which I like the best the poem or the picture.
beowulf_26
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14 posted 1999-09-20 08:25 PM


I needed that laugh. Thank you.
Severn
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15 posted 1999-09-20 08:41 PM



Sunshine
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16 posted 1999-09-21 08:51 AM


So now we all know what 'Deer looks like. Hummm.
Toerag
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17 posted 1999-09-21 09:02 AM


I knew it was him when I saw the nose....Great work....as usual....and quite funny!!!! One of these days I'm gonna try some of that humor stuff, all this serious stuff kinda brings me down......
DBeth
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18 posted 1999-09-21 10:15 AM


(Laughing out loud)
Too cute!

DBeth

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.

WhtDove
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19 posted 1999-09-21 10:51 AM


Good one DeVine. Loved that picture. LOL
Poet deVine
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20 posted 1999-09-21 01:54 PM


'deer! Where are you!? I see no reply from you! Have I offended you with this picture!

Michael
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21 posted 1999-09-21 07:13 PM


Oh, this is a kicker. Too funny. I better get out of here before you start posting pictures of femme and I.
LOL




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Michael Anderson


And so, being young and dipt in folly
I fell in love with melancholy,
But dreams - of those who dream as I,
Aspiringly, are damned, and die:


EAP


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