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The Loneliest Place That I Know

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Lucie
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0 posted 09-18-99 11:29 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

Echo’s of silence surround me,
the loneliest place that I know.
Darkness fades like a sweet memory
in the light of the early dawns glow.

The loneliest place that I know
and the sound of the wind through the trees.
In the light of the early dawns glow
I send a whisper to you on the breeze.

And the sound of the wind through the trees
I will send my love there to you.
I send a whisper to you on the breeze
just something for you to cling to.

I will send my love there to you
close your eyes can you feel my caress?
Just something for you to cling to,
on a day when you feel loneliness.

Close your eyes can you feel my caress?
Let it help you to ward off your pain.
On a day when you feel loneliness,
it might keep you from going insane.

Let it help you to ward off your pain
in the light of the early dawns glow.
It might keep you from going insane
the loneliest place that I know.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 09-18-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Sorry that you feel so bad Lucie. I am here to help see you through it as you help me.

Wonderful pantoum.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-18-99 11:32 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah, I see you've been talking with Dream....nicely done Lucie

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
caroline
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3 posted 09-19-99 12:07 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is beautiful Lucie Very soothing.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 09-19-99 12:28 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah Lucie, you sure know how to bring tears to my eyes....beautiful piece here, girl....This was absolutely tear-jerking....

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Isis
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5 posted 09-19-99 12:33 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

a beautiful and such sad piece, thanks for sharing, I too visit, the lonliest place that I know..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


passing shadows
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6 posted 04-23-2004 12:54 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I've been there too
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