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DreamEvil
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0 posted 1999-09-18 08:57 PM


Pulsing through the forums is a madness,
an affliction of soul caused by a bite.
It's symptom is wallowing in sadness,
though it's side effect is heart-felt delight.

The democratic diease that is here,
affects everyone both male and female.
Sappy insanity so cavalier,
scatters all thoughts like a covey of quail.

The bug that caused this is quite voracious,
exquisitely it's bite pierces your skin.
It's instinct for that bite is rapacious,
the first sign you've been bitten is a grin.

I don't want anyone to be alarmed,
but the bug learned to breed all on it's own.
In moments it's mystic venom has charmed,
caution to the wind is completely thrown.

I know of three the Love Bug has bitten,
including myself as one of the three.
The bite does have us completely smitten,
each with his own particular Lady.

All know my monniker is DreamEvil,
as well everyone knows who is my choice.
My chivalric honor is medieval,
so I announce my Lady is ~one voice~.

Another one bitten is Christopher,
who for a certain Lady does yearn.
The bite has caused his beloved prose to blur,
for his Lady, poetry he does learn.

The third to suffer it's bite is Michael,
for poetFemmeFatale his darkness lifts.
Thus begins the Love Bug's breeding cycle,
against the bite's pain lie all of it's gifts.

Beware all poets of the Love Bug's bite,
for the Bug pursues you all with fervor.
It's effects are misery and delight,
even to the casual observer.

From the Love Bug's bite no one is exempt,
nor can they choose to bow out in disgrace.
For those that try the Love Bug feels contempt,
for they have lost Love's romantic embrace.


©1999 DreamEvil



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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


© Copyright 1999 DreamEvil - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston
1 posted 1999-09-18 09:02 PM


I am so happy for all who have found love here. It makes me yearn for my love. This was a lovely poem DreamEvil.
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-18 09:25 PM


Looks out for that little bug.....where is he now??
Thanks Dream.....nice one

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Michael
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3 posted 1999-09-18 09:39 PM


Well put my friend,
It's definately CONTAGIOUS too.
Were all doomed.


Michael

Christopher
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4 posted 1999-09-18 09:48 PM


Doomed, I tell you! Doomed! (anyone hear the doctor from Lost In Space, besides me???)
Darn though, dream, it sure does itch!
LOL.
Thank you for explaining to everyone whats going on.. it can be confusing!


(And I think your idea about getting together and getting blasted sounded mighty fine! What you say Michael!)

poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 1999-09-18 10:02 PM


I knew Christopher was in heat, but I had no idea it had blossomed into "love" !!! Is he too shy to tell all of us who the lucky lady is ?

Dream, this is a wonderful tribute ! he he
Actually, I think it was Michael who bit ME last night...so can I lay all the blame on him for my weakness ? The love bug nibbles....at my heart...
Thank you so much for including me in this interesting poem of yours!!! Love it.....**curtsies

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Tara Simms
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6 posted 1999-09-18 10:35 PM


I'm with femme, I'm dying to know who Christopher's lady is. I'm just starting to figure out all the relationships in this place.

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Work like you don't need the money, love like it's never going to hurt, dance like nobody's watching.

DreamEvil
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7 posted 1999-09-18 10:52 PM


All I will say of Christopher's interest is that her name rhymes well with some of the end lines of this poem. Anymore, is quid pro quo and up to him.
caroline
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8 posted 1999-09-19 12:05 PM


Good one Dream! Keep biting Bug....hehehe..its keeping these guys posting all this great poetry


Christopher...I do believe you've "met your match" so to speak (I won't give you away, promise. Just send it all in small unmarked bills!)

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Michael
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9 posted 1999-09-19 12:09 PM


I'm with ya guys Christopher - lead the way.

Michael

johnt300
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san diego, ca.
10 posted 1999-09-19 12:17 PM


DreamEvil,
Really enjoyed this a lot. Keeps me posted on all the bug bites at this site, too. Interesting. thanks.
Tyson

WhtDove
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11 posted 1999-09-19 12:19 PM


Very well done! I guess this "bug" don't just bite in the spring time eh? Glad to hear there is 3. I hope it works for everyone of you!!!
Poet deVine
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12 posted 1999-09-19 01:08 AM


I have a can of raid! Stay away! There is only one many for me:


Christopher
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13 posted 1999-09-19 01:32 AM


Thanks Michael, but I started without you guys. Followings in dreams footsteps from a couple nights ago, I am well on my way to oblivion... (hic) and enjoying every minute of it!

Dream--- don't be giving any secrets away

caroline... $'s on its way!

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
14 posted 1999-09-19 01:57 PM


Darn....who left those nasty bugs loose anyway....oh my, that better not be a bite on my arm.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
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Sitting in Michael's Lap
15 posted 1999-09-19 04:23 PM


(waving hand over head) Bitten! Bitten!

(big dumb grin)

I hope everyone else that this darn thing bit is as disgustingly happy as I am ...

Vive l'amour!

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")



DreamEvil
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16 posted 1999-09-19 10:49 PM


Nochtdraco,
I'm sure that all of us are.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


Bob
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17 posted 1999-09-19 10:59 PM


I'd post my own opinion to this most accursed bug, but I did in "Love, Ego, and a bit of Schizophrenia." (Look out for the horrible plug, ahhh!!!!) But seriously, there's my interesting opinion.
Severn
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18 posted 1999-09-19 11:37 PM


Hmmmmm......
Perceptive, cheeky thing that you are Dream, this is very very VERY good.

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