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Dream My Fantasy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Dream My Fantasy Can you hear me calling In your dreams tonight Together we are falling Softly towards the light Can you feel me reaching out Through this dreamy mist You are mine beyond a doubt Relax, do not resist Can you feel my kisses Upon your lips so tender I am here to grant your wishes If only you’ll surrender Feel my hands glide on your skin Your flesh becomes alive If only you will let me in There’s nothing I’d deprive I am but a temptress Here to invade your soul Give in to me, let me posses Your no longer in control I will be your dreams at night Feel my many powers And when you rise with morning light I’ll seize your waking hours Feel my breath upon your ear In gasping, heated sighs You can feel me oh so near If you’ll just close your eyes Feel me standing next to you Longing for the night When in your dreams I’ll come to you As fantasies take flight Close your eyes and be with me My passion’s growing stronger Together in your dreams we’ll be I can wait no longer The time has come for us to be Darkness has dimmed the skies Love like no other, you will see If you’ll just close your eyes Tyson....just a word of thanks for your help and advice in this one. Each day you grow more precious. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-18-99).] |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
STANDING OVATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hoot...it is superb. I love every line!  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You are exceptional, hoot owl, A very moving work. michael |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Beautiful, Hoot. Every poem just gets better and better by leaps and bounds. It has been an honor to watch your work grow from our first meeting months ago. Very smooth and gentle, a dream you hate waking up from, because it is so good. Thank you. Tyson. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Caroline, Michael and Tyson....what can I say, I'm blushing from your praise, but thanks so much!!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Every line is beautiful!! ------------------ Helewes |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is EXCELLENT!!! What a work of perfect art you have created. Flowed just great. Absolutely terrific!!!!!!! |
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DBeth Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 110providence,ky.42450 |
Wonderful an outstanding job!! ------------------ When we give of ourselves whole heartedly,it comes back around ten fold. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Excellent Hoot! You amaze me more and more! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
JennyLee, WhtDove, DBeth and Master....thank you each and everyone of you for your comments ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
Hoot, I have no words! I love!!!!those 2 first lines: Can you hear me calling in your dreams tonight After reading these two lines, I couldn't wait to find out what the rest had to say. Wonderful job!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW! What a thoroughly fabulous piece! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
jaunita and Denise....thank you both very much ....I can't take all the credit on this one, I did have a bit of help and inspiration ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
jaunita and Denise....thank you both very much ....I can't take all the credit on this one, I did have a bit of help and inspiration ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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