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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 09-18-99 07:34 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dream My Fantasy

Can you hear me calling
In your dreams tonight
Together we are falling
Softly towards the light
Can you feel me reaching out
Through this dreamy mist
You are mine beyond a doubt
Relax, do not resist
Can you feel my kisses
Upon your lips so tender
I am here to grant your wishes
If only you値l surrender
Feel my hands glide on your skin
Your flesh becomes alive
If only you will let me in
There痴 nothing I壇 deprive
I am but a temptress
Here to invade your soul
Give in to me, let me posses
Your no longer in control
I will be your dreams at night
Feel my many powers
And when you rise with morning light
I値l seize your waking hours
Feel my breath upon your ear
In gasping, heated sighs
You can feel me oh so near
If you値l just close your eyes
Feel me standing next to you
Longing for the night
When in your dreams I値l come to you
As fantasies take flight
Close your eyes and be with me
My passion痴 growing stronger
Together in your dreams we値l be
I can wait no longer
The time has come for us to be
Darkness has dimmed the skies
Love like no other, you will see
If you値l just close your eyes

Tyson....just a word of thanks for your help and advice in this one. Each day you grow more precious.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-18-99).]
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caroline
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1 posted 09-18-99 07:38 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

STANDING OVATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hoot...it is superb. I love every line!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Michael
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2 posted 09-18-99 07:49 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

You are exceptional, hoot owl,
A very moving work.

michael
johnt300
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3 posted 09-18-99 08:17 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Beautiful, Hoot. Every poem just gets better and better by leaps and bounds. It has been an honor to watch your work grow from our first meeting months ago. Very smooth and gentle, a dream you hate waking up from, because it is so good. Thank you.
Tyson.
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-18-99 08:25 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Caroline, Michael and Tyson....what can I say, I'm blushing from your praise, but thanks so much!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
JennyLee
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5 posted 09-18-99 11:11 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Every line is beautiful!!

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Helewes
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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6 posted 09-19-99 12:34 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This is EXCELLENT!!! What a work of perfect art you have created. Flowed just great.
Absolutely terrific!!!!!!!
DBeth
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7 posted 09-19-99 12:48 AM       View Profile for DBeth   Email DBeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DBeth

Wonderful an outstanding job!!

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When we give of ourselves
whole heartedly,it comes
back around ten fold.
Master
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8 posted 09-19-99 12:57 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Excellent Hoot! You amaze me more and more!
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 09-19-99 01:22 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

JennyLee, WhtDove, DBeth and Master....thank you each and everyone of you for your comments

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
juanita
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10 posted 09-19-99 11:55 AM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

Hoot, I have no words! I love!!!!those 2 first lines:
Can you hear me calling
in your dreams tonight

After reading these two lines, I couldn't
wait to find out what the rest had to say.

Wonderful job!!
Denise
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11 posted 09-19-99 11:59 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

WOW! What a thoroughly fabulous piece!

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Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 09-19-99 12:35 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

jaunita and Denise....thank you both very much ....I can't take all the credit on this one, I did have a bit of help and inspiration

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
hoot_owl_rn
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jaunita and Denise....thank you both very much ....I can't take all the credit on this one, I did have a bit of help and inspiration

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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