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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-09-18 07:14 PM


Looking through the window
I see the stars are out
twinkling on their bed of velvet
hiding as if in doubt

No one thought you would be able
to one day fly to the moon
but now we can and as that's true
maybe a star you'll see real soon

what would you feel to see such wonder
these stars that hold our dreams
I think I'd wish for everyone
a couple that we'll call team

so taking my thoughts
one step more
close your eyes and
dream of an open door

the door you'll go through
will really depend
on how you view your life
the dream you comprehend

sweet dreams to those
that believe in fairytales
kisses on your eyelids
your dreams are now unveiled...

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-19-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-09-18 07:21 PM


Amazing! Like Van Gogh's 'Starry Night' painting! Loved this....

JTF
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since 1999-08-09
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2 posted 1999-09-21 03:42 AM


Beautiful ... ... It deserves to be on top
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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3 posted 1999-09-21 06:42 AM


I believe in fairy tales.....very well written Rainbow Girl.........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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4 posted 1999-09-21 11:51 AM


ahhh, a poem for the dreamers in the world, very beautiful!
Angel Rand
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since 1999-09-04
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5 posted 1999-09-21 12:26 PM


Beautiful!! I too believe in fairytales, since I am living one right now.
Well done!
from Angel

RainbowGirl
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6 posted 1999-09-21 12:34 PM


Thanks fellow dreamers..:-)

HUGS

Angel:..That's great..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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