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On a good day

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Seymour Tabin
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On a good day

She enchants me like morning's dew
With new born shadows passing thru.
Like odors, of the dawn of morn
From scented flowers still unborn.

She delights me with downy gay
Like bobbing butterflies at play.
She chitchats like the birds that sing
Their wakefulness of new born spring.

She steeps her humor like a tea
And serve the doses guiltlessly.
With plumb uniqueness of a child
And wisdom of the undefiled.

She banquets me. A shameless spread.
And though enchantment is inbred
Creation of our common needs
I am in awe, her common deeds.

On these days she plays Santa Claus
And I her child of wild applause.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-18-99 07:21 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Oh Sy....what a lovely day this is
(applause!)

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 09-18-99 07:54 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

caroline,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.
Julie
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3 posted 09-18-99 10:59 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Seymour,
This sounds like a wonderful day.
You did a really nice job with
the imagery. I really enjoyed it.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-19-99 10:57 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Julie,
Thank you for the read and comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Denise
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Another goody!

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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Dsnyder,
Your goody is like a piece of candy to me. *L*
Severn
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So Seymour, what on earth happens on a bad day? I like this, I do!
Seymour Tabin
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Severn,
On a bad day I think of a good one. thanks for the comment.
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sweet
 
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