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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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The hills may fade the stars may fall and we may be apart but my unpassioned love for you will never leave my heart... My love for you is stronger than the wildest wind or rain and it will live when life itself appears to be in vain... Above the roar and chaos against the raging sea and after all the sands of time have joined eternity... My love is more enduring than the ever faithful friend and far beyond my fondest hopes that touch the rainbows end... And though the universe may burn and melt away the sky my love for you will be the same and it will never die! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh - another impassioned romantic here...  |
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Jay_Jay Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 38San Diego, CA. USA |
Great poem Echo. It touched me very much. If that was written for someone they are very lucky. If you just wrote it to write it, it is very beatiful and if you ever decided to give it to someone they will love it, and if they don't, they don't deserve someone with a passion such as yours. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Nan...Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Jay_Jay...Once again thank you. I am glad that you like them |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Echo....this is indeed an excellent piece of poetry....WOW!! So perfect in it's rhthym and rhyme....It flows like silk. Wonderful!!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply lovely! I enjoyed this. I tried to access your website but it gave me an error.. am I doing something wrong?  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Hoot...Thank you kindly for your comment. Poet...I emailed you with the link |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Melanie another extraordinary piece. Gosh Hon I'm wearing a face of shame that I missed so many of your works. They truly are beautiful. May your gift rub off on me someday. Oh, to be able to write like this. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
*G* Loved this one too ! |
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