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Sunshine
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0 posted 1999-09-18 03:55 PM


Ancient Acrostic

I,

Autumn done, and a
Mode out of style, old,

Antiquated, declining;
Neglected, certainly seasoned...
Can I be retired?
Inducted into a quaint,
Elderly domicile, though hoary, and pray that
None may find me passé, or
Traditional?

©KRJ
18 September, 1999


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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 1999-09-18 03:57 PM


Perfect! Love this one, Sunshine!


Pepper
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2 posted 1999-09-18 03:58 PM


Sunshine, this is exceptional.....so well written...

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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-09-18 04:37 PM


Very well done!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Andrew Scott
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4 posted 1999-09-18 09:37 PM


Well Stated! We are only as old as we allow ourselves to be.
JennyLee
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5 posted 1999-09-18 11:03 PM


Sunshine, I truly love this one!!
Perfect...

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Sunshine
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6 posted 1999-09-19 08:57 AM


Thank you everyone. These are turning out to be more fun than work!
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7 posted 1999-09-19 11:59 AM


Sunshine, this is EXCELLENT!!! Brava!

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8 posted 1999-09-19 12:11 PM


Very well done indeed!

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Denise

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