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Illusions’ Dreams |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Illusions’ Dreams Once there came this bright illusion albeit a fallacy to my heart, I fell for its deep deception the delusions tore me apart. Wonderment came with the chimera and strong belief in the fantasy; Awake would I from the hallucination, away with the delusion from me. This damn poor bit of humbuggery this hocus pocus of the heart ne’ermore the falseness for me, from this mirage I shall depart. That figment of imagination, that trick of love’s daydreams the errors seen in the machinations are only that, a dream. ©KRJ 18 September, 1999 ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Another good one! What are you eating out there on the farm? If it helps you create this kind of poetry, I want some too!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
PdV, any compliment from you means I've done did a pretty good job. As far as eating...perhaps the diet I'm on has brought out the hallucinations indeed! Again, I'm s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g! Thanks! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Sunshine, I really enjoyed the "language" you used in this. Original and refreshing! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- ..."to thine own self be true." >William Shakespeare |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Good poem, bad dream, good solution, bad illusion. *L* |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Another grand one from Sunshine...no stretch of my imagination needed to know you're a great poet  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 09-18-99).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful piece, sunshine. But never stop dreaming o.k. "Yet if Hope has flown away In a night, or in a day, In a vision, or in none, Is it therefore the less gone? All that we see or seem Is but a dream within a dream." EAP Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is my one of my forms of exercise: take a word, grab the thesaurus, and make something logical out of words that have basically the same meaning. Try it: it's fun! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
another wonderful piece Sunshine..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Yep, loved it Sunshine...Keep 'em dreams coming.. |
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