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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-09-18 03:35 PM


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Sometimes it hit me like a hammer
Or an arrow thru the heart or mind
A point that is driven to new depths.
A balloon released into the sky.

Could be a beginning or ending,
The gem of love or of hates condemn.
The toll of a bell, warning of hell.
Or lightning lighting between the clouds.

It could be something like a bonding
Or a thing of implore or explore.
It could be the presenting of truth.
Or just a new way of promising.

It could be something the fair wind brings,
Or it could be the high of a sigh.
It could be one of so many things.
But I really think it's plain old why?

It's the why that makes the mind go round,
And the why that brings the fruit to ground.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
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1 posted 1999-09-18 03:41 PM


Sy once again you amaze me with your incredible talent......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Michael
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2 posted 1999-09-18 03:43 PM


Well, why not?
Seriously, Seymour, another great poem.
I was trying to think of a title but I think it would almost be inappropriate - "it is" something very hard to put a name on isn't it.

Michael

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3 posted 1999-09-18 04:34 PM


Nicely done Seymore!!
Sunshine
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4 posted 1999-09-18 05:54 PM


Philosophical pieces to ponder. Well done, Sir!
Julie
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5 posted 1999-09-18 05:59 PM


Magnificent! Great read, thoughts of why and
all the things that go on with why. Soooo
why is it that you have so much talent? .

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare



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6 posted 1999-09-18 10:12 PM


Catchy title, Sy.....and good poem.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-09-19 11:03 AM


To my wonderful friends of the web. We thank you, my ego thanks you and my heart thanks you. And most of all "I" thank you.
Denise
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8 posted 1999-09-19 12:09 PM


Yes, why are you so talented?

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 1999-09-19 11:25 PM


Dear Dsnyder,
I'm really not, just persistant. *L*

Severn
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10 posted 1999-09-19 11:32 PM


But you are talented! As you prove again...and again...through your persistence!
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11 posted 1999-09-19 11:46 PM



Yep..kudos once more Seymour..

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 1999-09-20 01:25 PM


Severn and moonmoon,
You people are the greatest, thanks again.

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13 posted 2011-02-20 04:42 PM


... and 'why' we come back so many years later.

A

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