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Never give her up

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Tyke
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0 posted 09-18-99 02:21 PM       View Profile for Tyke   Email Tyke   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tyke's Home Page   View IP for Tyke

Never give her up

I could never give her up.
Every morning when I wake
she walks back into my mind
I would give up everything else
just to have her back again
The rain can't wash away the tears
of the memories now lost in time
as I stand on the edge of tomorrow
struggling to hold onto yesterday

I would follow the moon or the sun
to the end of eternity and beyond
just to hold her in my arms again.
I would forsake all my friends
if that was what it would take
just to have her touch me again.
She's gone and changed the dream
now what is lost can not be found
and still I will never give her up.

tych
9/18/99
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kk
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1 posted 09-19-99 10:45 PM       View Profile for kk   Email kk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kk

...this is very pretty.....
she must be special....
Tara Simms
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2 posted 09-19-99 11:07 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

She should either A) take you back, or B) get a restraining order against you. Lovely read.

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hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-20-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

LOL @Tara's statement. Actually, this was a beautifully romantic piece, well written.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
passing shadows
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4 posted 04-23-2004 12:29 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I do understand this deeply
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