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caroline
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0 posted 09-18-99 02:21 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline

Blue

A poet's composition

Winner of ribbons

Colored in blue

Could not express

The pain of the morning

When you left me

The rain sliding down

The window panes

Tears for a connection

Severed without ceremony

Buried without a grave

You offered no other

Gesture than silence

But the look in your

Eyes told me all

It is penned in my mind

With indelible ink

A poet's composition

Winner of ribbons

Colored in blue

© caroline 1999





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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

[This message has been edited by caroline (edited 09-18-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
Tyke
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1 posted 09-18-99 02:26 PM       View Profile for Tyke   Email Tyke   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tyke's Home Page   View IP for Tyke

I really like your imagery. Very well done.
johnt300
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2 posted 09-18-99 02:29 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Caroline,
I liked this one a lot.
'Tears for a connection
Severed without ceremony'
Excellent lines. Thank you.
Tyson
Michael
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3 posted 09-18-99 02:30 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Glad you felt the need for a fresh post with this Caroline - It truly is a beautiful piece.

Michael
caroline
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4 posted 09-18-99 02:32 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Thank you all for your kind responses.

And yes, Michael...I needed to hide my maniacal ravings...*LOL*

T.Q.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-18-99 02:51 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

caroline,
Enjoyed the poem go to the top of the class.
Pepper
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beautiful indeed......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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I thought I posted to this fabulous piece, but I guess not. BRAVO!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 09-18-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Truly superb!

Hugs

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DreamEvil
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9 posted 09-18-99 07:32 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Indeed, well worth the read.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

caroline
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10 posted 09-19-99 12:11 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Thanks all...your comments mean so much.

Hoot...you did reply, but to the first post, which I had Nan remove (bless her heart) due to the WAR between Michael, Master and myself...which, btw...I WON!!! Thanks for reposting...you're a sweetie

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Master
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11 posted 09-19-99 01:01 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

you won??? I didn't know... but how? I was on the top and then all of the sudden... ohhh it's terrifying! This is the first time I've ever been defeated... oh well at least I lost to a great writer with a great poem! Loved it, Caroline!

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I fell in love and kept on falling
passing shadows
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LOVE THIS!
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