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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
A poet's composition Winner of ribbons Colored in blue Could not express The pain of the morning When you left me The rain sliding down The window panes Tears for a connection Severed without ceremony Buried without a grave You offered no other Gesture than silence But the look in your Eyes told me all It is penned in my mind With indelible ink A poet's composition Winner of ribbons Colored in blue © caroline 1999 ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... [This message has been edited by caroline (edited 09-18-99).] |
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Tyke Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26Calgary, Alberta, Canada |
I really like your imagery. Very well done. |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Caroline, I liked this one a lot. 'Tears for a connection Severed without ceremony' Excellent lines. Thank you. Tyson |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Glad you felt the need for a fresh post with this Caroline - It truly is a beautiful piece. Michael |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thank you all for your kind responses. And yes, Michael...I needed to hide my maniacal ravings...*LOL* T.Q. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
caroline, Enjoyed the poem go to the top of the class. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
beautiful indeed...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I thought I posted to this fabulous piece, but I guess not. BRAVO!!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Truly superb! Hugs ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Indeed, well worth the read. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Thanks all...your comments mean so much. Hoot...you did reply, but to the first post, which I had Nan remove (bless her heart) due to the WAR between Michael, Master and myself...which, btw...I WON!!!  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
you won??? I didn't know... but how? I was on the top and then all of the sudden... ohhh it's terrifying! This is the first time I've ever been defeated... oh well at least I lost to a great writer with a great poem! Loved it, Caroline! ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
LOVE THIS! |
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