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Lucie
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0 posted 09-18-99 12:26 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

An offer of an open hand, an open heart to you.
In return you offer friendship, simple, pure and true.
So many friends have come and gone destinies unknown.
But rarely does one come along with qualities you’ve shown.

You’ve not delved into my private life or asked a lot of me.
Just offering your quiet strength in word and poetry.
You’ve taught me how to view the world with someone else’s eyes.
That though each person looks for truth, they must also search for lies.

Two opposites attract sometimes each sharing a small part.
Of pain and pleasure, tears and smiles, personality and heart.
I am proud that we could overcome the differences we had.
We found the strength to share our feelings, some were happy and some sad.

I hope that in the future we will remain friends you and I
forging little differences and finding friendship binds that tie.
Please accept from me these simple words that I have put to rhyme.
I pray that forever you will allow me to call you a friend of mine.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-18-99 12:33 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Lucie...you have said so much here. This is a beautiful tribute for Dream. And you will find that his friendship is as unique and wonderful as he is. I know I truly treasure him.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 09-18-99 12:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nice Lucie

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Poet deVine
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3 posted 09-18-99 01:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A lovely tribute poem! I'm sure he'll be thrilled to read it!
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4 posted 09-18-99 01:35 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Lucie, this was a great poem, and such a nice tribute (for lack of another word) to DreamEvil. I enjoyed it-nice to know how people are brought together here.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 09-18-99 01:56 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Lucie, I must say....you sound stricken ?? We should talk !! Let me feel your forehead - I can remember when you were screaming about him !! I see you've kissed and made up ! BRAVO !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Michael
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6 posted 09-18-99 04:30 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Hey Lucie,
Let's get in a really big fight - just so you can write me something like this when we make up.
Seriously, this is so well written and so touching at the same time, I found it quite extraordinary.

Michael
Lucie
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7 posted 09-18-99 08:02 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

You keep Femme occupied the way you have and we may fight Michael..hehe.. You gotta share dude!! Thanks, glad you liked the poem.
LngJhnAg
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since 07-23-99
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8 posted 09-18-99 08:15 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Shoot, Lucie - if Dreamie doesn't like this poem, can you repost it for me???? I'd love to have something this well written just for me.
Isis
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9 posted 09-18-99 08:47 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautifully said, a worthy tribute to a new friendship. It's the lasting kind that matter..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


DreamEvil
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10 posted 09-18-99 09:05 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Well now, finally have I arrived at this wonderful tribute to me. Echo all of the above, dear friend and add to it my own feelings of friendship for you.
'Twas indeed a rocky start to our friendship, yet that let me know you all the better. Thank you very much for this verse, Lucie.

pFF, I'll leave kissing you to Michael but I wouldn't mind the making up to settle our differences.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Dark Angel
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11 posted 09-19-99 04:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lucie, a wonderful tribute for a wonderful person. Loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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