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Poet deVine
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Laying with you in fields of sweet clover
living our summertime dreams
I wonder if you still remember
such a long time ago it seems

I told you tales of knights of old
and dragons slain in defeat
told of soldiers marching in unison
crushing the dead under their feet

But the girl that wove such fantasies
grew up and moved away
but I still remember the stories I told
and the boy as he listened each day

Now I tell tales in verse and prose
to forum friends Iíve come to know
wondering, ever wondering
where did my summer friend go?

Perhaps someday youíll stumble
across a poem of mine
and wonder: who is this person
by the name of Poet deVine.



© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-18-99 11:59 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Sweet memories deVine. Are you sure you didn't eat any of that candy?

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
hoot_owl_rn
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very nicely written Poet....I think we all have people in our past we just can't help but wonder where they are now
Elizabeth
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3 posted 09-18-99 01:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Beautiful, Poet deVine.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Nan
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4 posted 09-18-99 02:01 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...A wonderful tale you weave...
U K Hero
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5 posted 09-18-99 02:39 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Iíll remember you
Oí clever poet
De vine you are to me,
So gifted are you in rhyme
Of wit, you neatly pen it...

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 09-18-99 03:12 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Poet deVine,
Well you made a believer out of me.
Nice poem.
JennyLee
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7 posted 09-18-99 03:12 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Beautifully Told this story of old !!
Poet deVine
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8 posted 09-18-99 08:20 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Thank you all for your kind words... summer's over now..time to move on....
Isis
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9 posted 09-18-99 08:33 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautifully said, this Summertime dream.
Look back on them fondly for they never really die..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


DreamEvil
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10 posted 09-18-99 08:54 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Where to, Lady deVine, the winter of your discontent? Not!

Excellent verse.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Michael
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11 posted 09-19-99 12:31 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I often wonder similiar thoughts of people who've crossed my life.
I hope this one finds his way to you, Devine One.

Michael
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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12 posted 09-19-99 12:51 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Very nice PdV! But do we have to move on? We can't we keep summer around a bit longer? Ah, yes in our poetry! Thanks!
Dark Angel
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13 posted 09-19-99 04:13 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautifully written Poet

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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