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This Heart

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White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


0 posted 09-18-99 03:06 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for White Wolf

This Heart

Memories of you flood my mind
All the times I have spent wishing that you were mine
All the times I have seen you from a distance
All the time not knowing how you feel
I hope that you are interested in me as I am in you
You have caught my heart
Be gentle, my heart is soft and fragile
It has been battered and broken
It knows pain without bounds
And yet it insists that I give it to you
So my heart is in your loving hands
I long for the day
That I can add myself to that heart
The day in which I am embraced in your love

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"Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."
© Copyright 1999 Justin D. Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
kk
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1 posted 09-18-99 07:31 AM       View Profile for kk   Email kk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kk

very nice....i like this.
Stefanie71
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2 posted 09-18-99 08:42 AM       View Profile for Stefanie71   Email Stefanie71   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stefanie71

i have felt this way, exactly . a heartfelt plea. great poem
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-18-99 12:18 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

nicely done

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


4 posted 09-26-1999 02:27 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is lovely....I hope to read many more!!
It feels sooo wonderful to write...it helps to release what is inside!! It is a freedom from oneself!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-26-1999).]
Beki
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5 posted 09-26-1999 03:55 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

tender and vulnerable...very nice
Dragoness
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6 posted 09-26-1999 04:09 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

BEAUTIFULLY DONE!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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