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White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland

0 posted 1999-09-18 03:03 AM


Let Me

A gentle whisper in my ear
I turn around and you are not there
Oh how I wish that you were
Your tender words chasing away all my darkness
Filling me with hope
A hope that one day I can call you mine
A hope that you will one day give me a chance
A chance to hold you, kiss you, to love you
A chance to show you that not all guys are the same
To show you that I can love you if you let me
Let me hold you, kiss you, show you
And most of all
Let me love you

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"Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

© Copyright 1999 Justin D. Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-09-18 03:46 AM


Excellent! Welcome to the family! I looked at your website and like what I see! You did a good job with it!

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-09-18 04:25 AM


Clap-Clap
Beautiful!

Justbleu
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3 posted 1999-09-23 12:10 PM


A very heartfelt, hopeful, and lovely poem!!
Thank You!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
4 posted 1999-09-25 11:52 PM


Thanx for taking the time to read this poem it is one I wrote about 2 years ago when i first started writing poetry.
Denise
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5 posted 1999-09-26 12:04 PM


Very romantic and lovely!

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Denise

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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6 posted 1999-09-26 01:29 AM


~Sigh~..:..
Great job my new friend and welcome!..:..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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7 posted 1999-09-26 04:21 AM


Let me echo the others...this is a very tender and heartfelt poem....nicely said

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-09-26 08:45 AM


Beautiful

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-04-18 02:46 PM


nice to come across you again here Justin
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