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White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


0 posted 09-18-99 03:03 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for White Wolf

Let Me

A gentle whisper in my ear
I turn around and you are not there
Oh how I wish that you were
Your tender words chasing away all my darkness
Filling me with hope
A hope that one day I can call you mine
A hope that you will one day give me a chance
A chance to hold you, kiss you, to love you
A chance to show you that not all guys are the same
To show you that I can love you if you let me
Let me hold you, kiss you, show you
And most of all
Let me love you

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"Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."
© Copyright 1999 Justin D. Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-18-99 03:46 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent! Welcome to the family! I looked at your website and like what I see! You did a good job with it!
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 09-18-99 04:25 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Clap-Clap
Beautiful!
Justbleu
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3 posted 09-23-1999 12:10 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

A very heartfelt, hopeful, and lovely poem!!
Thank You!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wastelan


4 posted 09-25-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

Thanx for taking the time to read this poem it is one I wrote about 2 years ago when i first started writing poetry.
Denise
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5 posted 09-26-1999 12:04 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very romantic and lovely!

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Denise
Isis
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6 posted 09-26-1999 01:29 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

~Sigh~..:..
Great job my new friend and welcome!..:..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


Beki
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7 posted 09-26-1999 04:21 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Let me echo the others...this is a very tender and heartfelt poem....nicely said

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 09-26-1999 08:45 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
passing shadows
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nice to come across you again here Justin
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