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Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-09-18 02:15 AM


Who am I?
That's a silly question.
I am me!
Who is that?
Well since you ask, that is who I am!
What does that mean?
Well, now that you mention it, I'm not quite sure.
I am me!
That is to say.
I am when I am me.
Is that OK?
You see, if you don't agree, I can be whatever you want.
Who would you like?
What would you like?
What is it that you wish me to be?
Just myself?
What do you mean?
Which me is that?
Who am I?
Well, now that I stop to think, I guess I'm not so sure.
I am who you need.
I am what you want.
So, which me will it be?
Who am I?
I guess I can only say, I am who you see!

© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Jay_Jay
Junior Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 38
San Diego, CA. USA
1 posted 1999-09-18 06:49 PM


I am glad you are who I see, because who I see happens to be very talented and passionate. I like this poem a lot, it hits a part of me, cause I often think the same thing. Very well done!

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Never allow life to get in the way of living...

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-09-18 08:52 PM


Well I like what I see,
Seems your nice to me! Good questions.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-09-18 09:26 PM


Thank you...I try to be the best me I can be, so if you like what you see so far, it makes me feel like I am doing good, thanks =u)
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-10-30 02:58 PM


A lot of thought you provoked here. I like what I see too!

Sometimes we are not ourselves, but become what others want us to be. We twist and shape ourselves according, and sometimes that real ME gets lost. I hope that yours don't. Wonderful Echo!

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 1999-10-30 06:02 PM


This is wonderful ! Just be you and if that's not good enough, they are not worthy. : )
RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985
South Florida
6 posted 2002-02-13 03:28 PM


I like you the way u r! no need to change at all!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2003-01-01 04:20 AM


me too
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