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Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


0 posted 09-18-99 02:15 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Who am I?
That's a silly question.
I am me!
Who is that?
Well since you ask, that is who I am!
What does that mean?
Well, now that you mention it, I'm not quite sure.
I am me!
That is to say.
I am when I am me.
Is that OK?
You see, if you don't agree, I can be whatever you want.
Who would you like?
What would you like?
What is it that you wish me to be?
Just myself?
What do you mean?
Which me is that?
Who am I?
Well, now that I stop to think, I guess I'm not so sure.
I am who you need.
I am what you want.
So, which me will it be?
Who am I?
I guess I can only say, I am who you see!
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Jay_Jay
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since 09-18-99
Posts 38
San Diego, CA. USA


1 posted 09-18-99 06:49 PM       View Profile for Jay_Jay   Email Jay_Jay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jay_Jay

I am glad you are who I see, because who I see happens to be very talented and passionate. I like this poem a lot, it hits a part of me, cause I often think the same thing. Very well done!

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Isis
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since 09-06-99
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Sunny Queensland


2 posted 09-18-99 08:52 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Well I like what I see,
Seems your nice to me! Good questions.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


3 posted 09-18-99 09:26 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thank you...I try to be the best me I can be, so if you like what you see so far, it makes me feel like I am doing good, thanks =u)
WhtDove
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4 posted 10-30-1999 02:58 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

A lot of thought you provoked here. I like what I see too!

Sometimes we are not ourselves, but become what others want us to be. We twist and shape ourselves according, and sometimes that real ME gets lost. I hope that yours don't. Wonderful Echo!
Munda
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since 10-08-1999
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The Hague, The Netherlands


5 posted 10-30-1999 06:02 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

This is wonderful ! Just be you and if that's not good enough, they are not worthy. : )
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6 posted 02-13-2002 03:28 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

I like you the way u r! no need to change at all!
passing shadows
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7 posted 01-01-2003 04:20 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

me too
 
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