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roxane
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
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0 posted 1999-09-18 01:53 AM


i know that sometimes
we tore each other up with words
i saw you cry so many times
i now stumble more easily on my own tears
please understand that i love you more now
than i ever could before
with each passing day
you consume more space in my heart
and it becomes greater
through you i love the world
to you my words grow loving
and you have given me
the beginning of a soul
even standing in your shadow
i bask in your glow
when i hold your hand
it's only half of my own
you are part of who i am
darling if you want to run away
i'll pack my stuff too
if you want to start a nirvana tribute band
i know all the words to blew
i can't help it but be like this
whenever it comes to you
my life, my love, my darling
my only love that was true
together my sweets at last forever
all the time it seemed impossible
i love you i need you
and only you make me whole

© Copyright 1999 roxane - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-09-19 12:36 PM


I missed this the first time! This was just packed with feeling! I thought this was great. It was very sweet and tells clearly of one who loves deeply!!!
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-19 12:43 PM


Ditto!

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Denise

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