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~*~ Weep Not For me ~*~

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Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


0 posted 09-18-99 01:51 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Weep not for me, my loves, today
like a ship at see, I've sailed away
beyond the horizon, you see no more
perhaps to reach another shore.
Weep not for me, today, but go
accomplish things you should, but know
that I'll be pleased and there nearby
just listen closely, hear my sigh.
When oft my name, you should but call
I'll be there, loves, to break your fall
and listen to your tales of woe
then whisper that I love you so.
My life's been only good with you
around and near with love true blue
but now it's time to take my place
reserved for me in outer-space.
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 09-18-99 01:54 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Interesting....the rhthym and rhyme are very good in this piece, I myself loved it up to the last two lines, I think I would have liked to see it end a bit differently. Welcome to the group

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 09-18-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thanks for the welcome. I am glad you liked it, although I am sorry you didn't like that last two lines =u)
Sean
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since 09-20-1999
Posts 17
Holtville, CA. USA


3 posted 09-23-1999 07:23 PM       View Profile for Sean   Email Sean   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Sean

WOW...I jsut read I think all the poems that have been posted by you Echo, and I have to say, they are wonderful, but I dont want to reply to all of them, because I dont want people to get sick of you hogging the top lol, but they are simply wonderful. Especially the ones on page 9, 10, 11, and 12 I think it is. Truly one of my favourite poets in here (no offense to any one else)! I think this one should be read so back up to the top it goes!
Artur Hawkwing
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4 posted 09-23-1999 07:33 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Some poetry you must take seriously, not lightly. Take this as an example.
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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5 posted 09-23-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I thought this was wonderful!
RainbowGirl
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since 07-31-99
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6 posted 09-23-1999 07:44 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Echo

If *I* could make your world right
I would do so
If I could give you what you need
I would do so
If I could be what you need
I'd be that someone
but
I'm only me
You have to reach for me
and then I'm there
for you
but I was too late...

I'm so sorry!

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-23-1999).]
 
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