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Two Stars Oversprinkle

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TrulY PreciouS
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0 posted 09-18-99 01:45 AM       View Profile for TrulY PreciouS   Email TrulY PreciouS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrulY PreciouS

Two Stars Oversprinkle



Earlier, we were together

Later, you've gone somewhere better

Over the years we were apart

Inside, you were always in my heart

Upon those tears when we used to fight

Along the golden ages full of delight

Among the memories we've shared

At that time, you were the one who cared

Before, I should have used my mind

From those times, I've been so blind

Open my heart and eyes, I realize

Throughout those moments, I've been in paradise

Into your arms, I fly to you

Towards the light when our hearts will be two

By now two stars oversprinkle

Beyond the heavens that seem to twinkle

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TrulĄ Preciou§



"Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!"



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LiLDiZzY
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1 posted 09-18-99 01:59 AM       View Profile for LiLDiZzY   Email LiLDiZzY   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for LiLDiZzY

marvelous... just marvelous! =)

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what if I, keep holding on...just maybe you'll see, that I do need you...

I know you probably will never love me too, but from the second I wake up I will never stop thinking about you...
TrulY PreciouS
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thank you dizzy!! u have usch lovely thoughts!! =)
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good write, love the ending
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