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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 09-18-99 01:31 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

(This was written in a game of poetry tag with Master...a bit of a different poem, but it's very fitting to it's title....thanks Master )

Welcome To My Dreamworld

Can't you hear the motor turning?
Can't you see the candle burning?
Can't you see it's flame?
Can't you hear my poor heart beating?
Can't you see it's life we're cheating?
With ourselves to blame.
Every day the flame gets brighter.
This web we've weaved keeps getting tighter.
Can't you feel the burn?
Can't you hear the morning breathing?
Clouds are turning and receding?
Shrinking sky with every turn.
Are we here, merely dreaming?
Or is passions fire steaming?
Deep within our heart.
Is it the sun that's calmly rising?
Slowly creeping, so surprising?
Natures work of art.
Cast me in this dreamscape longing.
Always here, never belonging.
Tumbling to the end.
Are you here inside my dreams?
Is this reality what it seems ?
Answer me my friend.




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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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1 posted 09-18-99 01:34 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This deserves the top spot for sure
Great collaboration, you two!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Master
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2 posted 09-18-99 01:44 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

This definitly deserves to be on the top! And I give all the credit to myself! (Just kidding) I've had a great pleasure working with a great writer, thanks Hoot, you are truly the best!
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


3 posted 09-18-99 01:53 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Great job!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-18-99 01:59 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Caroline and Christopher....thank you both so much

And Master...it was my pleasure...a bit of a different type work for me, but it was fun...and I am the one who had the pleasure of working with a master

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Master
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5 posted 09-18-99 02:17 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

naahhhh... I have to say I had MORE pleasure working with you. Thanks Hoot!

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I fell in love and kept on falling
juanita
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6 posted 09-18-99 03:13 AM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

Love it, great work!!
johnt300
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7 posted 09-18-99 11:08 AM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Hoot and Master,
Wow! Really great collaboration. Hope to see much more.
Tyson
hoot_owl_rn
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junaita and tyson....thank you both

Okay Master...I won't argue with you

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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