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My blue rose

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Seymour Tabin
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My blue rose

She glows upon a tender stem.
This rose that I pursue.
A crown of thorns as diadem.
Her majesty shows blue.

Her attitude vasilates dim.
I analyze her soil.
She thinks my adjuration, whim.
And I, a foolish foil.

I cannot help this love I dare.
These minions of reveal.
I cannot stop, this aura's care.
Nor can I bare conceal.

I wish she stop the endless roil,
Or set the pot to boil.
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hoot_owl_rn
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Your rhthym and rhyme are superb Seymore

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3 posted 09-18-99 01:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
I was hoping for a red rose HOHOHO.
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4 posted 09-18-99 01:22 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I loved it, Seymour. Hope that you get your red rose...

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 09-18-99 03:22 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot and Elizabeth,
Two sweethearts, thank you both for the read
and nice words.
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A real beauty! I missed so much here the past few days, don't think I shall ever catch up! Glad I found this one!

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Denise
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7 posted 09-25-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Nan...you silly girl...those are petunias.

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Seymour: Sounds like you need another HUG!
(Where's RainbowGirl?...Gee)
Anyway...red roses?
Roses are red
Petunias are blue
I love the verse in YOU.




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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert



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8 posted 09-25-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dsnyder and Julie,
I thought this one was gone forever. Thank you so much for the wonderful comments.
 
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