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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-09-17 11:49 PM


My blue rose

She glows upon a tender stem.
This rose that I pursue.
A crown of thorns as diadem.
Her majesty shows blue.

Her attitude vasilates dim.
I analyze her soil.
She thinks my adjuration, whim.
And I, a foolish foil.

I cannot help this love I dare.
These minions of reveal.
I cannot stop, this aura's care.
Nor can I bare conceal.

I wish she stop the endless roil,
Or set the pot to boil.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-09-18 12:11 PM



hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-09-18 01:56 AM


Your rhthym and rhyme are superb Seymore

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-09-18 01:17 PM


Nan,
I was hoping for a red rose HOHOHO.

Elizabeth
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4 posted 1999-09-18 01:22 PM


I loved it, Seymour. Hope that you get your red rose...

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 1999-09-18 03:22 PM


Hoot and Elizabeth,
Two sweethearts, thank you both for the read
and nice words.

Denise
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6 posted 1999-09-25 06:33 PM


A real beauty! I missed so much here the past few days, don't think I shall ever catch up! Glad I found this one!

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Denise

Julie
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since 1999-08-20
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7 posted 1999-09-25 07:35 PM


Nan...you silly girl...those are petunias.

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Seymour: Sounds like you need another HUG!
(Where's RainbowGirl?...Gee)
Anyway...red roses?
Roses are red
Petunias are blue
I love the verse in YOU.




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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 1999-09-25 10:19 PM


Dsnyder and Julie,
I thought this one was gone forever. Thank you so much for the wonderful comments.

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