How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #2 Archive
 New thoughts form in my head...
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

New thoughts form in my head...

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


0 posted 09-17-99 11:44 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

New thoughts form in my head
Although still kind of blurred
They’re anxious to be read
They’re eager to be heard

I feed them to the pen
Where they dissolve in ink
The pen controls my hand
Creating what I think

The paper drinks my thoughts
And slowly grows in price
It dresses up in words
And shines before your eyes


------------------
I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


1 posted 09-17-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I'll gladly heed the call of a fellow poet, Master...*LOL* But with great writing like this, you hardly need any help!
To the top with you now!

------------------
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


2 posted 09-18-99 12:01 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Alright!!! I'm on top of the world!
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


3 posted 09-18-99 12:04 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

How was that 2 second reign? See anything from that mountain??? LOL
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


4 posted 09-18-99 12:05 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Not much keep me up here for a while!!! LOL
Michael
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 08-13-99
Posts 6333
California


5 posted 09-18-99 12:07 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, I hate to push you back up - ya know,
But this was worthy of merit.

BTW caroline - I'm cutting your pay!

Michael
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


6 posted 09-18-99 12:09 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

HEY!! Let the Bidding Wars Begin!


OR...Does Caroline want to be on top???

------------------
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


7 posted 09-18-99 12:09 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Love ya Caroline, It seems we have another challenger!

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 09-18-99).]
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


8 posted 09-18-99 12:22 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

What are you doing way down here?
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


9 posted 09-18-99 12:25 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Looking down at you!!! Grin
Michael
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 08-13-99
Posts 6333
California


10 posted 09-18-99 12:27 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Hehe Master,
It was fun wasn't it.
Doh - I just put you back!!!

Michael
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


11 posted 09-18-99 01:16 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Now that they all calmed down... I have the top all to myself!!! (devilish laugh)
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


12 posted 09-18-99 01:20 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

NO... well I'll wait caroline, but the top is destined to be mine again!
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


13 posted 09-18-99 01:30 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Oh hell... I am tired got to go you guys, but I'll be up there with you in the morning, promise you that!
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


14 posted 09-18-99 01:31 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

My gift to you...bumping you up instead of off! LOL
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


15 posted 09-18-99 01:34 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Hey...I hate to see him get a swelled head getting knocked back to the top again, but I absolutely had to reply here. This is a great piece of work master. Wonderfully created...oh I love this part!!
"The paper drinks my thoughts
And slowly grows in price
It dresses up in words
And shines before your eyes"




------------------
"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


16 posted 09-18-99 01:34 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

So you think... tricked you!
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


17 posted 09-18-99 01:35 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

BRAT!!! hehehehe

------------------
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


18 posted 09-18-99 12:22 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Just woke up and I just have to get back into this.
caroline
Senior Member
since 08-16-99
Posts 1251
http://members.xoom.com/bellad


19 posted 09-18-99 12:27 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Good AFTERNOON sleepyhead! *LOL*

I did want to say how really great this poem is. You are quite the talented one!

------------------
The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Master
Senior Member
since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


20 posted 09-18-99 01:19 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

12 o'clock is still morning for me! Thanks and I feel the same way about your poems Caroline!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


21 posted 04-23-2004 01:05 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nice
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #2 >> New thoughts form in my head... Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors