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I Wanna Be On Top!!!

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Michael
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0 posted 09-17-99 11:29 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

I WANNA BE ON TOP!!!

I wanna be on top!
So what's a poet to do -
So their poem won't drop
Straight on down to page two.

Should I speak of love?
Should I warm up to all of you?
Would that keep me above,
Would that really impress you?

Should I antagonize?
Should I cut at you with my wit?
Would that draw more eyes -
And make poor ol' me a hit?

I don't think I'm asking too much,
Just a reply, maybe two.
Yeah, I would really like to know I touch -
Each and everyone one of you.

But I don't think it's hopeless,
No, I'll tell you what I'll do.
I'll make a thousand aliases -
And crash forum number two.

My name immortalized to all,
Yes, there, you'll see my worth!
And for once my words won't fall -
Clean off the face of the Earth.

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 09-19-99).]
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1 posted 09-17-99 11:43 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Happy now? *LOL*

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2 posted 09-17-99 11:49 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Ok Ok I'm trying...geez! Give someone a lift and y'all just keep driving by...

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3 posted 09-17-99 11:52 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Anyone got a booster chair for this man?

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Michael
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4 posted 09-17-99 11:53 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Hehe...Thanks Caroline
for all your responses. You're too kind - LOL

Michael (The first of many of my own responses)

[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 09-17-99).]
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5 posted 09-17-99 11:54 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

You're quite welcome


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6 posted 09-17-99 11:57 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

No fair, I want to be on top also. Hey caroline, help me out!
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7 posted 09-18-99 12:00 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ha - Master!
I'm King of the mountain and I'm never gonna sleep again.


Michael
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8 posted 09-18-99 12:02 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

ROTFLMAO!!!!! Nan's gonna kill us all...
(Do I hear dovewings beating???)

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9 posted 09-18-99 12:02 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Not anymore! Whooops just brought you to the top.... CAroline????
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10 posted 09-18-99 12:05 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I am paying Caroline dearly for her contribution, just try and keep up, master!!! Hehe, Hehe I am the King - I am the King!!!

Michael
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11 posted 09-18-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Ooooohhhhh do I smell MONEY?????

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12 posted 09-18-99 12:07 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Keep up with me I'm the king of the world now!
Master
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13 posted 09-18-99 12:07 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

damn I brough him up again... CAROLINE?????
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14 posted 09-18-99 12:12 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Caroline, come back...I'm sorry.
I'll triple your pay and throw in all those benefits you want.

please, please - I may never survive without you.

Michael
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15 posted 09-18-99 12:13 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

BIG EVIL GRIN

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16 posted 09-18-99 12:15 AM       View Profile for Miss Behavin'   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Behavin'

Am I on the bottom?
Master
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17 posted 09-18-99 12:15 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Hahahhaaahhaa...! Wait I can't post this, or I'll bring you to the top! CAroline?
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18 posted 09-18-99 12:16 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Uh, is that a yes?

Caroline?

Don't leave me hanging like this!!!

michael
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19 posted 09-18-99 12:16 AM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Because you made me laugh! Up ya go.
Michael
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20 posted 09-18-99 12:17 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I smell a conspiracy...
Caroline & Master - This is War!!!

Michael
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21 posted 09-18-99 12:18 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

She turned against both of us! SHe has her own poem on the top now!
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22 posted 09-18-99 12:21 AM       View Profile for Ain' Miss Behavin'   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ain' Miss Behavin'

Scuse me - Is someone here having a party without me?
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23 posted 09-18-99 12:21 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I give up Michael! You be on top!
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24 posted 09-18-99 12:23 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Ain'tMissBehavin'
I'm sooo glad your here.
Help me please call in all your wonderful cousins too. I will make it up to you I promise.

Michael
 
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