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Dear Lord I Pray

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Lucie
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0 posted 09-17-99 11:28 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I went walking one morning and saw the works of god.
I bowed my head and prayed "Oh Lord I praise your job."

It was hard for me to pray at first for so little did I know.
But it seems he understood me and I bowed my head down low.

Our father which art in heaven, to thee I humbly bow.
I have seen your power, but never realized till now.

How much my actions mean, I havenít at all been fair.
To those I hold most dear and those who love me and care

And now dear God Iíve lost my love, I hurt him and he walked away.
Oh how I want him back again for this dear Lord I pray.
© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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1 posted 09-18-99 12:11 AM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Lady Lucie: I hope he answers your call.
Julie
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2 posted 09-19-99 04:30 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

No doubt this one was straight from the heart; deserves to be on top.

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Julie
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..."to thine own self be true."
>William Shakespeare


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Very heart-felt... and well done.
poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 09-23-1999 11:50 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I truly understand the 3rd and 4th lines...sometimes even though you feel your words are spoken to deaf ears, rest assured they're not....I believe we find a peace in just saying what's in our hearts....but I do think there's someone listening.

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


WhtDove
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5 posted 09-23-1999 12:40 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

No doubt He hears you Lucie! May your prayers be answered!!!
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6 posted 09-23-1999 05:30 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Dear Lucie, no one should feel such pain in their life more than once. No words of mine could give testament to the sympathy and empathy I feel for you. As always, I am here for you.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

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