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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Her ~one voice~ soothes my savage, misborn rage. Entwining with hers, my spirit takes flight. All my guilt her forgiveness does assuage. It took a lifetime for me to find her. Now my Lady and I must be apart. How could I have become so blind to her? Truly though I have loved her from the start. Most important to me is her healing. Loving her became the whole of my life. There are no secrets that need revealing. I will love forever my online wife. Heaven itself has blessed us with this love. For ~one voice~ I have thanked the Lord above. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-17-99).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Soul-Brother. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
She has definitely turned your thoughts around! Very nicely written, and I am glad someone was able to bring you into the world of happiness. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A sweet, beautiful tribute, Dream. I'm glad you have shared you caring side with us all. Michael |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful Dream, simply beautiful..it seems you've definitely found someone to lead you into the light. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful poem, and I love the bit about on-line wife, well thought out... ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Dude, I'm gonna start crying here! I must say that the change has been interesting to watch in regards to the subject matter of your poery. At first, I think the passion was a little obscure, but now I see it flowing with much more ease. I must say I wasn't sure if I liked your "lighter" stuff at first, but it has definitely grown on me! Well done bro, another hit from the heart... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep growing, keep glowing, keep going. Well done, Sir. |
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