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DreamEvil
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0 posted 09-17-99 06:56 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

My Lady's touch is rapturous delight.
Her ~one voice~ soothes my savage, misborn rage.
Entwining with hers, my spirit takes flight.
All my guilt her forgiveness does assuage.

It took a lifetime for me to find her.
Now my Lady and I must be apart.
How could I have become so blind to her?
Truly though I have loved her from the start.

Most important to me is her healing.
Loving her became the whole of my life.
There are no secrets that need revealing.
I will love forever my online wife.

Heaven itself has blessed us with this love.
For ~one voice~ I have thanked the Lord above.


©1999 DreamEvil


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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©



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Dark Angel
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1 posted 09-17-99 07:35 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is beautiful Soul-Brother.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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2 posted 09-17-99 09:22 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

She has definitely turned your thoughts around! Very nicely written, and I am glad someone was able to bring you into the world of happiness.
Michael
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since 08-13-99
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3 posted 09-17-99 09:23 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A sweet, beautiful tribute, Dream.
I'm glad you have shared you caring side with us all.


Michael
Alwye
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In the space between moments


4 posted 09-17-99 09:30 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful Dream, simply beautiful..it seems you've definitely found someone to lead you into the light.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Isis
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since 09-06-99
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5 posted 09-17-99 10:11 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful poem, and I love the bit about on-line wife, well thought out...

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


6 posted 09-18-99 02:07 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Dude, I'm gonna start crying here!
I must say that the change has been interesting to watch in regards to the subject matter of your poery. At first, I think the passion was a little obscure, but now I see it flowing with much more ease. I must say I wasn't sure if I liked your "lighter" stuff at first, but it has definitely grown on me!
Well done bro, another hit from the heart...
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


7 posted 09-18-99 10:27 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Keep growing, keep glowing, keep going.

Well done, Sir.
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