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What it Means |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Think of blinded eyes, which have never seen color…their first look at a rainbow Think of one who never believed in God and suddenly has proof of His existence Think of a dying sun, and in its death it explodes to become a trillion stars Think of the first dance between new lovers, the way they look at each other Think of your first look out the window on the first snow of winter, still untouched Think of the sound of a laughing child and remember how it brightens any room Think of the rhythm of my heart and know each beat belongs to you … ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
WOW!!! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Indeed this does suit my thoughts much better than the last. TY, my friend. Will need all the help I can get.  ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
*LOL* Thank you Juanita! Dream...all the help you need, anytime, friend. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow....caroline, this was magnificent!!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
thanks hoot...coming from a poet of your calibur, I'm humbled ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This is beaultiful and tender..very nice :-) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh my....beautiful ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Caroline, "Think of a dying sun, and in its death it explodes to become a trillion stars" to think that my death [or anyone's] becoming a trillion stars gives me much to live for, and then be remembered for, long thereafter. Absolutely beautiful. Sunshine |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Caroline, Very nice. Really enjoyed this. Thank you. Tyson |
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