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What it Means

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caroline
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You ask what your love means to me…

Think of blinded eyes, which have never
seen color…their first look at a rainbow
Think of one who never believed in God
and suddenly has proof of His existence
Think of a dying sun, and in its death
it explodes to become a trillion stars
Think of the first dance between new
lovers, the way they look at each other
Think of your first look out the window
on the first snow of winter, still untouched
Think of the sound of a laughing child and
remember how it brightens any room
Think of the rhythm of my heart and know
each beat belongs to you …


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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
juanita
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1 posted 09-17-99 07:53 PM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

WOW!!!
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2 posted 09-17-99 08:07 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Indeed this does suit my thoughts much better than the last. TY, my friend. Will need all the help I can get.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

caroline
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3 posted 09-17-99 08:09 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

*LOL* Thank you Juanita!

Dream...all the help you need, anytime, friend.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow....caroline, this was magnificent!!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
caroline
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5 posted 09-17-99 10:08 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

thanks hoot...coming from a poet of your calibur, I'm humbled

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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This is beaultiful and tender..very nice :-)
Pepper
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oh my....beautiful

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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8 posted 09-18-99 10:13 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Caroline,

"Think of a dying sun, and in its death
it explodes to become a trillion stars"

to think that my death [or anyone's] becoming a trillion stars gives me much to live for, and then be remembered for, long thereafter.

Absolutely beautiful.

Sunshine
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Caroline,
Very nice. Really enjoyed this. Thank you.
Tyson
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