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Richard 33
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0 posted 1999-09-17 04:32 PM


Last night I went to bed with alot on my
mind, lots of answers I just couldn't find.
As I dropped off to sleep, all was silent,
not even a peep. It was then I started
dreaming, and out of the blue, there was my angel, she stood within my view.
Her beauty was so great it took my breath.
I was so stunned, I asked have I met my
death?
She replied no I've been sent from above,
to show you the way, and to show you true
love.
We talked of many things that night, things
only she coud have known.
She kmew my soul as if it were her own.
She then embraced me with her overwhelming
beauty, and charms, as she took me into her
beautiful open arm's
She then said to me, as I looked into her
angelic eye's so blue. Don't give into life's
struggles, someday I'll be back for you.
I then awoke alone in my bed, but memories
of her will always remain in my head.

© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 1999-09-17 04:41 PM


Richard: I was nowhere near you, I even have an alibi...my teddy, but I have to be truthful and say he can't confirm this..*g*

Wonderful poem..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Richard 33
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2 posted 1999-09-17 06:03 PM


Thats ok Rainbow Girl I will tell them you
are innocent, Thanks for the flowers'

Emmy
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3 posted 1999-09-17 06:13 PM


This poem was truly rich... I enjoyed it a lot. Well done!
JTF
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France
4 posted 1999-09-17 06:18 PM


he said blue eyes .... *phew*

Great poem Richard


Richard 33
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5 posted 1999-09-17 06:26 PM


Thank y'all very much for your kindness!!!
It means so much!!!!

RainbowGirl
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6 posted 1999-09-17 06:34 PM


Richard: Thanks for liking the flowers and protecting the innocent..I'm sure the angel concerned picked them with great care (or stole them...ooops )

HUSG



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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa
7 posted 1999-09-17 06:38 PM




**LAUGHING WITH BIG GRIN ON MY FACE........

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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8 posted 1999-09-17 06:43 PM


Great job Richard, will she come back to love you or take you when your time has come? Which is it?
I loved it though.

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



RainbowGirl
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9 posted 1999-09-17 06:49 PM


Richard: well?..Which is it?...ROFL

HUGS

JTF: Of course I have green eyes..LOL

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 09-17-99).]

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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10 posted 1999-09-17 07:07 PM


Geez, how come I don't have dreams like that? Not about women of course. It was a beautiful one!!!
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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11 posted 1999-09-17 07:29 PM


Wow, Richard, this is beautiful, I love it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
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glen easton, wv usa
12 posted 1999-09-18 01:45 AM


I am not sure whether she is coming back
or not, I guess I will have to wait until I
go to sleep tonight. Wouldn't it be nice if
she did?********************

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-04-23 01:10 PM


sad sweet write
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