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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
someone once said "it's not reality" wrap yourself up in him and we drift away keep a distance from the core of a saint selfless gestures to mutilate i can't find a place to fall into and yet i take up space why do i attempt to friends do not forgive they are like fences you can see right through but they don't let you in where is the gate? ------------------ "Come night, come darkness, for you cannot come too soon or stay too long in such a place as this." Charles Dickens roxane |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
roxxie - now THIS is deep - I think I'll go read it again - I like those last lines |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Where is the gate? Good question...There seems to be just walls-called humans.It's said the gate is found within us-but it seems to be too well hidden. An interesting read. PAL ------------------ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Deep indeed! I have to ditto on those last lines of, "where is the gate." If those so called friends won't let you in that gate, then shut it on them, and find you some new ones! A true friend will let you in. Great piece!!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Deep thoughts for the night. What friend did something so cruel to you? (HUGS) needed and sent to you this night. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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