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Paul Allen Lupien
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0 posted 09-17-99 02:41 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

Never was such sweet command
as six years young,with treat in hand,
un-shod feet on grassy land,
go running fast,then quick-still stand,
to speed again for no clear cause,
as youthful season claps applause
and marks it well for future thought,
to be caressed and not forgot-
a long ago soft summers' haze,
a so missed one of once were days.

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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 09-17-99 02:45 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Paul

I really like this one for the melancholy it evokes.
hoot_owl_rn
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oh, I do like this one...alot!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Richard 33
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3 posted 09-17-99 06:35 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Good poem Paul, made me remember when I was
young. Made me feel good. Thanks!
I also wanted to let you know, that I told
Lady X how I felt about her, it didn't quite work out the way I wanted it to.
caroline
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4 posted 09-17-99 07:34 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Memory invoking and beautifully done Love your style.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Paul Allen Lupien
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5 posted 09-17-99 11:48 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

Thanks for the kind words everybody.
Richard,so sorry things didn't turn out as hoped...at least you know and so does she.
That's a positive I think.

B.W.

PAL


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Nan
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6 posted 09-18-99 12:09 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I still go barefooted - and only socks in the winter....
Sunshine
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7 posted 09-18-99 10:36 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

We live again in our grandchildren's laughter...

well done, Sir!
Paul Allen Lupien
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8 posted 09-18-99 10:46 AM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

But Sunshine-I'm kidless!

Thanks for your words and Nan too.

signed,
The ex-musician who only fathered songs,

PAL

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Paul Allen Lupien
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9 posted 09-18-99 10:50 AM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

P.S. to Nan-ONLY socks?

PAL

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U K Hero
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Short sweet and packed full of goodness, loved it.
Pepper
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delightful PAL......I too like your style..........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
johnt300
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12 posted 09-18-99 03:33 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

Paul,
Very nice. I liked this immensley. Thank you.
Tyson
Pepper
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"Father of songs"? any we might know?

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Paul Allen Lupien
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14 posted 09-18-99 06:39 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

(no,I'm not posting this to get "on top"-heights make me dizzy!)

Pepper,

Possibly but not probably.(how's that for being cryptic?)

Love to all,really appreciate the support.

PAL

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passing shadows
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excellent!
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