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Trynete Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35Cape Cod, MA |
Like a bird in a cage, I flap my wings, and try to be free. But then I realize I can't if you're around me. Can't you see all I want is to be free? I feel like I'm locked in chains, and I feel so much pain. It seems everytime it rains, it poors. My inside feels as if it has rotten to the core. When I write I feel so free, free as the breeze, that blows through the trees. I look at my past, and I see I've come so far, but it seems I'm still fightin' this war. I see the birds fly so high above me. And I wish that's where I could be. When I die spread my ashes on the wings of seagull, and then my dreams will be fullfilled. ------------------ To live is to love, and to love is to live... the meaning of life. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I have been in that cage before....I'm happy to say I took flight ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh I can sooo relate to this poem...someone once tried to lock me up!! It was suffocating me!! I broke free!! So wonderful to be!! Thank You for sharing this!! ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Next time he cracks the door, do no more... take your flight, into the mystery of the night. You did a good job on this, I can feel the grief. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- ..."to thine own self be true." >William Shakespeare |
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