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suthern
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0 posted 09-17-99 12:35 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for suthern

My apologies... this poem boomeranged and caused more pain than it portrayed.

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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-17-99 12:43 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Suthern:

Come here, so I can put my arms around you and give you a whopping great big hug...

PLEASE

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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LngJhnAg
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2 posted 09-17-99 12:51 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Queen - she needs a whopping alright - right on the seat of her pants! This is really good, Belle, albeit a tad dark and gloomy. Are you OK?
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3 posted 09-17-99 12:58 PM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

A fine poem Suthern !

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4 posted 09-17-99 01:47 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Spanking? (perk) This might be interesting!

And you're right, LJA... I could get much gloomier if I tried! *G*
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-17-99 02:22 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Suthern this is so sad but so beautifully written. We need to cheer you up a bit now, seems my last few poems are on a bit happier note, lets see what we can do with you now.
Hugs
Ruth

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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6 posted 09-17-99 03:46 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

You had me from the first line to the very
last.SAD.....

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7 posted 09-17-99 03:50 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

hoot & Jenny... I am sorry to make people sad... it's only the poem, not the poet! Perhaps I should post that disclaimer? LOL. Thanks for your kind words!
 
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