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Feel My Hand Upon Your Heart

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Beki
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0 posted 09-17-99 11:07 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

Feel My Hand Upon Your Heart

When pine trees quiver with the wind's caress,
Their needles trembling in the dark;
When you need a woman's tenderness,
Then feel my hand upon your heart.

When starlight silvers the trembling bough
And wood-shadows dance together, apart;
When moonglow falls on your weary brow,
You'll feel my hand upon your heart.

When darkness gathers and sleep would claim you,
when loneliness lingers and love seems far,
I'll reach across the miles to warm you -
Just feel my hand upon your heart.

Beki (1998)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


1 posted 09-17-99 11:27 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Another compliment on a job well done. Being a native Californian, now transplanted, you've made me again hear the pine boughs sing.
Nan
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2 posted 09-17-99 11:56 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

We've another hopeless romantic among us...
This is lovely, Bek...
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-17-99 12:30 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Beki,
Nice job.
hoot_owl_rn
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Very nicely done Beki....this poem emits a great deal of warmth

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Paul Allen Lupien
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5 posted 09-17-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

" When starlight silvers the trembling bough
and wood-shadows dance together-apart..."

cracklingly good !

PAL

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Balladeer
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6 posted 09-17-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Exquisite poetry.
caroline
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7 posted 09-17-99 07:59 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This is simply gorgeous!!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Alwye
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8 posted 09-17-99 09:38 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I agree...gorgeous work...I love the beauty in this piece...exellent!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Beki
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9 posted 09-18-99 04:45 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Thanks everyone..I wrote this for a close online friend when we had to be out of touch for awhile..but I think it succeeds on many levels :-)
JennyLee
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Bravo Again Beki...this is just my style!!!
Encore Dear Lady....

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Helewes
 
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