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LoveAngel2000
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Walking, walking, remembering all the I love you's there were. Thinking, thinking, about all those lies. Panting, panting, breathless am I. I just caught my boy friend cheating, and he tried to lie. :*(
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Justbleu
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1 posted 09-22-1999 01:19 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Short and to the point!!

Welcome!!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


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2 posted 09-22-1999 01:44 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Liked the use of repitition in this.

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>William Shakespeare


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