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Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


0 posted 09-17-99 04:30 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of air
when everyone's around you
and you are just not there?
When you are very lonely
and no one seems to care
when everyone ignores you
and acts like you're not there?

Have you ever felt like nobody
when friends make fun of you
when people say we're friends
but it really sint true?
Sometimes you feel like you're unloved
and no one wants to care
when everyone has a friend
and you're alone somewhere?

Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of dirt
you're always getting stepped on
and always getting hurt?
I guess if you have
then you know how I feel
but because I am a person
in time will I heal?
© Copyright 1999 Echo Rhayne - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


1 posted 09-17-99 06:50 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

You will heal, in time we all do, no matter how big it seems at the time.
Love the poem and Welcome!!:

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~


BrightLight
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since 09-07-99
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2 posted 09-17-99 07:28 AM       View Profile for BrightLight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrightLight

Wow, I saw myself in your poem like I was looking in a mirror. It's when the insecurities of my being decide it's time for them to shine, that I take to falling into despair for no apparent reason. Your poem is excellent, it opened up my mind to see a person that lurks inside that I prefer to hide.
Echo Rhayne
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Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


3 posted 09-17-99 05:28 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Thank you Isis and BrightLight for you comments. I appreciate them =u)
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 09-18-99 02:12 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Echo...even the toughest scars heal in time. I think we've all been there from time to time...and so you know you are not a nobody...I'll bump you back to the top.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


5 posted 10-30-1999 02:34 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Oh my sweet girl! I know where you come from.

I've felt like many times...I really like how you put this. Sometimes we feel so insignificant. But we all have purpose! It will get better. You will heal!
Munda
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since 10-08-1999
Posts 3629
The Hague, The Netherlands


6 posted 10-30-1999 03:54 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Very good poem ! Yes, I know how that feels and time will heal you eventually, but first, I learned, I had to start loving myself. : )
 
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