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Tick... Tock... ( Inspired by Seymour Tabin)

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Master
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0 posted 09-16-99 11:54 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Time is racing with the night
Tick by tick
Shades and shadows conquer light
Tack by tack

And my pen will never rest
Tick by tick
Broken heart beats in my chest
Tack by tack

Everything begins to change
Tick by tick
Night is acting on the stage
Tack by tack

Iím becoming sore and weak
Tick by tick
The sky turns dim and black
Tack by tack

I fall asleep upon my back
Tick by tick
And my dreams seem so unique
Tack by tack

Now I do not hear the clock
Tick and tack


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I fell in love and kept on falling
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 09-17-99 09:50 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Now that's an interesting one Master...I liked it!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Nan
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2 posted 09-17-99 11:09 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Me too..... I like it too, Master...
Master
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3 posted 09-17-99 12:08 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks Hoot and Nan, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Seymour for the inspiration.
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-17-99 01:05 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Master,
The honors are all yours.
You did a wonderful job, congrads.
Master
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5 posted 09-17-99 03:19 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks, glad you liked it.
 
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