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Green Velvet (one of my first real poems)

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IsabelleSkye
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0 posted 09-16-99 11:31 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for IsabelleSkye

dappled sundrops
whispering autumn trees
meadow flecked with wild color
like the splattering from an artist's brush
soft feathers of clouds
like my lover's kisses
float on October skies
Green Velvet
embraces
passion melts
crashing thunder
light like a stained glass kaleidescope
shatters through me
as your heart meets mine
in a sunlit glen

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Every man has in himself a continent of undiscovered character. Happy is he who acts Columbus to his own soul.......J. Stevens
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Michael
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1 posted 09-16-99 11:44 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Eloquent, Izzy.
vivid imagery. I derive a very tranquil scene from this poem. beautiful

Michael
Beki
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2 posted 09-17-99 02:15 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

The imagery here is lovely...a wonderful first poem...keep writing! :-)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
Colin
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3 posted 09-17-99 02:19 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

wow! You touch my soul. (but I guess you know that yeah?)

Love, EW.

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I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know?
Nan
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4 posted 09-17-99 10:29 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Go Izzy......
Alwye
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5 posted 09-17-99 09:52 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful, beautiful work...I love the imagery..exquisite piece.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

passing shadows
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nice...very nice
 
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