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Lost In The Crowd

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freedom 63
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since 09-16-99
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Glen Easton, WV, USA


0 posted 09-16-99 11:20 PM       View Profile for freedom 63   Email freedom 63   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freedom 63

Does anyone see me?
I don't think so
My inner being damaged
that's the way it goes.

Does anyone hear me?
I cry silently.
No one notices.
That's the way it's gotta be.

A superficial smile
no one would know.
My heart is breaking.
Is losing it's glow.

It's been a bad year
Months numbering nine
What can I do?
Running out of time.

Life Turns a deaf ear,
Blind eyes do not see,
No one understands,
That's the way it's gotta be.

hhhhhhh
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BrightLight
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1 posted 09-17-99 08:31 AM       View Profile for BrightLight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrightLight

Welcome, I see you through your words, and hear the emotions that they evoke. Nine months may have passed with no joy, but the three months remaining are a wonderful time to change the course. Glad you have come to touch base here at Passions, may this be the beginning of your happiness.
Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


2 posted 09-17-99 01:34 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Very good. very good indeed.
Of couse I could be biased!!!


Flowers to ya mutter...... ha ha ha
freedom 63
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3 posted 09-18-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for freedom 63   Email freedom 63   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freedom 63

Thank you BriteLite for your
thoughtful and kind words.
I thought I was lost in another crowd
until I got your response. Thanks
again. Have a good night. I will be
writing again, soon.


Thank you Richard 33 for your response.
I could almost smell the flowers. I
guess you could be biased, just a little bit.
freedom 63
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since 09-16-99
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Glen Easton, WV, USA


4 posted 09-18-99 12:06 AM       View Profile for freedom 63   Email freedom 63   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freedom 63

Thank you BriteLite for your
thoughtful and kind words.
I thought I was lost in another crowd
until I got your response. Thanks
again. Have a good night. I will be
writing again, soon.


Thank you Richard 33 for your response.
I could almost smell the flowers. I
guess you could be biased, just a little bit.
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