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A New Day

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hoot_owl_rn
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(This was written in a game of poetry tag with Johnt300....we thought we'd post it to see what you thought...thanks Tyson...hugs )

A New Day

The harsh surf crashes upon the sand
Lifting seagulls with noisy flight
The sound of both the waves and gulls
Muted by the beating of my own heart
With your hand in mine, cherished friend
The ocean seems but a world away
With our toes sunk in the sand
We walk along the waters edge
Horizons view within our reach
And lifes new day has just begun


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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 09-16-99).]
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caroline
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1 posted 09-16-99 08:59 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Great tag team there Nice job!

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Nan
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I figured it's about time I comment to you first instead of last - but either way, I enjoy just as much - especially when it's about the ocean... If this is a joint effort, keep up the good teamwork..
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 09-17-99 09:26 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Thank you both Nan and Caroline...we wrote this in a matter of a few minutes

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
WhtDove
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4 posted 09-17-99 09:32 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well you two have done wonders in a matter of minutes. The rest of us are in touble. Very nice you two!!!
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cool!
hoot_owl_rn
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Whtdove and passing shadows, thank you both

Whtdove...I've read everyone elses poetry here, I think no one has anything to fear

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
juanita
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7 posted 09-17-99 01:15 PM       View Profile for juanita   Email juanita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juanita

Love this one!!
hoot_owl_rn
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thanks juanita

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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Wonderful poem! I like to see poets working together like this!
johnt300
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Thanks to all for the comments. We had a lot of fun with these and I'm looking forward to more of it. Thanks again.
Tyson
hoot_owl_rn
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Poet....thanks alot

And I second Tyson's statement about having fun with these and looking forward to more

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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