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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-09-16 04:52 PM


I was involved in a case of mistaken
identity, yes it's true. Me the one, and
only Richard 33.
I thought her words of love were meant for
me, but they weren't, they were meant for
another.
The sting was sharp at first, but by far
has ever been the worst.
I think no less of her than I did before, it
is still her that I love, and adore.
Truest love, and friendship can endure
anything, even cross words or an occasional
sting, it truely is a wonderful thing.
If you are reading this now you know who
you are.
I will continue to admire from afar, my
love, and boundless friendship will find
your heart wherever you are.
I promise never to bring you sorrow, I will
not be here today, and gone tomorrow.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-16-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-16 09:11 PM


Oh, how sad! Yet a very wonderful poem.

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Denise

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
2 posted 1999-09-16 09:44 PM


Richard, this truly is a beautiful poem...although I'm not sure I like the title...? It seems a bit cold...? I'll e-mail you back on this one - give me time to think...

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-09-16 10:44 PM


Richard 33,
Enjoyed the read.

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