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Mistaken identity

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Richard 33
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since 09-09-99
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glen easton, wv usa


0 posted 09-16-99 04:52 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richard 33

I was involved in a case of mistaken
identity, yes it's true. Me the one, and
only Richard 33.
I thought her words of love were meant for
me, but they weren't, they were meant for
another.
The sting was sharp at first, but by far
has ever been the worst.
I think no less of her than I did before, it
is still her that I love, and adore.
Truest love, and friendship can endure
anything, even cross words or an occasional
sting, it truely is a wonderful thing.
If you are reading this now you know who
you are.
I will continue to admire from afar, my
love, and boundless friendship will find
your heart wherever you are.
I promise never to bring you sorrow, I will
not be here today, and gone tomorrow.

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-16-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 08-22-99
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1 posted 09-16-99 09:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, how sad! Yet a very wonderful poem.

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Denise
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
Posts 2961
Arkansas


2 posted 09-16-99 09:44 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Richard, this truly is a beautiful poem...although I'm not sure I like the title...? It seems a bit cold...? I'll e-mail you back on this one - give me time to think...

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


Seymour Tabin
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since 07-07-99
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Tamarac Fla


3 posted 09-16-99 10:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Richard 33,
Enjoyed the read.
 
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