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Beki
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0 posted 1999-09-16 04:16 PM



Nights Like This

On nights like this, too cold for sleep, I think
of you. At 3am the sky is deep
with stars, the moon hangs low above the roof
tops. Shadows weave themselves like ghosts at play
between the houses. Far away I hear
the early tide approach the shore.

That beach
was ours on nights like this, to walk along
and fashion dreams from salt and sand. Those nights,
too cold to sleep alone, we played at love
like children play at growing up. I was
your Cinderella, you the prince who came
to spirit me away to some far-off
enchanted castle made of sand.

On nights
Like this, I think of you and how your eyes
would fill my room with light as soft as fall
ing snow. The shadows taught us how to touch
in whispers, like the moon would touch the waves.
Too cold for sleep, I think of you, and how
your body's heat could make me shiver as
a woman will, alone, on nights like this.

© Beki (1989)

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

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1 posted 1999-09-16 04:18 PM


Yup! *G* Great poem!!
Elizabeth
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2 posted 1999-09-16 04:19 PM


Wonderful, Beki. Glad to have you here.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


Master
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3 posted 1999-09-16 04:29 PM


One of my favorites... Glad to see you here Beki!

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Beki
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4 posted 1999-09-16 07:10 PM


Master you sly dog! How nice to find a friend here ...:-) Thanks for the comment, it's nice to have a poem that ranks as a favorite for someone whose work I like too.
((hugs))

Denise
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5 posted 1999-09-16 07:51 PM


This is beautiful, Beki! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-09-16 08:42 PM


Very nicely done

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Beki
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7 posted 1999-09-17 01:38 AM


Thanks Denise and Hoot..and hoot, I love your signature quote!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

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8 posted 2004-04-23 01:29 PM


beautiful
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