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See Not

I can see you now
The blinders have been removed.
So I close my eyes.

16 September, 1999
İKRJ


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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow




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1 posted 09-16-99 02:37 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

A breakup, maybe? Nice haiku, Sunshine, you did well.

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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Thanks, E'beth!
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poignant...Sunshine, I love it......

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few words, big impact.....well done!!

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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Pithy...Liked it

PAL

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