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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 09-16-99 02:27 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Shadows

Honesty bellowing
breaking apart
casting shadows
displaying doubt
quivering soul
drowning alone

Yearning affection
churning tides
washed ashore
shadows depart
evolving heart
concurs doubt
standing strong
dream embraced
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hoot_owl_rn
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What a nice sequence of words...going from dispear to hope. I liked it

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
Lost Dreamer
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Thank-you Hoot, Glad you liked it.
passing shadows
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oh...methinks I like!

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*shadowy-one*
Michael
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A beautiful poem, Lost Dreamer,
Like the sun peeking out after a storm.

Michael
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Very enjoyable! I like happy endings and hope!

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Denise
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