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Fatuously Me

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Stefanie71
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0 posted 09-16-99 01:15 PM       View Profile for Stefanie71   Email Stefanie71   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stefanie71

Fatuously Me
Your specious nature so alluring,
makes quotidian life alive.
Perforce my emotions, uncovering the veil,
evanescent joy, will I survive?
Love is not facile, yet you shine munificently;
but how indolent will this be?
On your path, intransigent at times,
i see the paucity of me.

revision :

Your deceptively pleasing nature,so alluring,
makes ordinary life alive.
Hold back my emotions, uncovering the veil,
fleeting joy, will i survive?
Love is not easy, yet you shine generously;
but how painless will this be?
On your path, uncompromising at times,
I see the scarcity of me.


[This message has been edited by Stefanie71 (edited 09-16-99).]
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LngJhnAg
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1 posted 09-16-99 01:26 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Alright, ya lil Dictionary tease - are ya happy? You made me open that well-worn tome several times and actually read what you wrote. This was a dirty female trick to make me slow down and think, and I hate to do that! lol
Toerag
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2 posted 09-16-99 04:17 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Lessee....going through my Webster's.....okay....got that one....and now.....yep...got that one.....let's see here..yep....that's a great poem......and all this time I thought it was about "Flatuence" and LongJohn had posted under another name again?.....Good work though....
Stefanie71
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3 posted 09-16-99 04:24 PM       View Profile for Stefanie71   Email Stefanie71   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Stefanie71

ok .. ok... i know i know... no more websters .
Toerag
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4 posted 09-16-99 04:26 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Stephanie....is was really good sweets....but I'm just a damn Toerag?...I ain't even learnt poe-tree yet?.....LOL...
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