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Constant struggle

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The Jackal
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0 posted 09-16-99 11:33 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

i am the constant struggle
watch hope fade away in the bubble
send out echos far and wide
lets all see what lies inside
if you can pry yours eyes that is
from the beauty of the flesh
more innocent you feel
than all the rest
its all about eye of the beholder
isnt that what you told her
was that before or after
you tried to mold her




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Iloveit
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1 posted 09-16-99 02:27 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

wow, that is excellant, you could be writing this about me and mine specifically, but probably about many, love that is and lets be is rare, you captured the other kind perfectly....very good!
hoot_owl_rn
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wow.......nicely written
roxane
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3 posted 09-16-99 10:16 PM       View Profile for roxane   Email roxane   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for roxane

this is so good. i really like the last line. i swear, you have made a great fan in me. keep them coming.
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