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Constant struggle
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Constant struggle |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
i am the constant struggle watch hope fade away in the bubble send out echos far and wide lets all see what lies inside if you can pry yours eyes that is from the beauty of the flesh more innocent you feel than all the rest its all about eye of the beholder isnt that what you told her was that before or after you tried to mold her ------------------ |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow, that is excellant, you could be writing this about me and mine specifically, but probably about many, love that is and lets be is rare, you captured the other kind perfectly....very good! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
wow.......nicely written |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
this is so good. i really like the last line. i swear, you have made a great fan in me. keep them coming. |
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