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0 posted 09-16-99 11:09 AM       View Profile for MissQ   Email MissQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MissQ

"Her"

This is a story, albeit truth or tale, about Her...
She is every girl and woman you ever knew or have imagined, the one that you loved so passionatly and totally, the one you cursed and damned to hell, the one you cannot imagine life with or without.
She is a dreamer and a believer...yet totally conscience and uncertain.
She lies as her honesty is relentless, she never doubts you , yet she never seems to believe in you......
She floats above....high above us all, yet, she is so grounded, grounded like six feet deep, within the darkness of us all. She can look within the depths of your soul, yet she can't seen to get past the human infrailities.
Her silence is deafening as she crashes beneath you, her mind is shouting viciously and critically. Her arrogance abounds as she smiles.....ever so sweetly.
You love her, as she loves you, she is intoxicating and suffocating. She steals your breath as she spins her web. She closes her eyes and enters your soul, you feel the fires of her hell within and finally at the heighth of your uncertainty and unwillingness, reaching the moment of acceptance.....you finally let go and find release unto her...the one true cataclysmic entity of undying affection...the reaper of your heart....the angel of your soul.....Her.
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1 posted 09-16-99 03:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What a way to describe a love/hate relationship. I like your style of writing, MissQ.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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