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The Untitled One

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MissQ
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Untitled

Like a gentle breeze you came to me

Closed my eyes and breathed you in.

Engulfed my soul

with a light so strong,

I feel the darkness beginning to dim.


Uncertainty and guilt

always have loomed so near.

Closing the doors, giving up,

unable to lose this fear.


Rising up from the smoke of my prayers

many things left unsaid.

I feel your energy holding me up,

clearing the clouds inside of my head.


For you , I'm forever grateful

Basking in your light.

Always within my heart

Forever in my sight.
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caroline
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This is beautiful!! "Closed my eyes and breathed you in"...what a great line.

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Artur Hawkwing
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I love this !! Good one !
hoot_owl_rn
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Nicely written piece.....I really like the lines:
"Always within my heart
Forever in my sight."


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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus
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